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The haiku is a micropoem, originating in seventeenth century Japan, which, when well handled, has a singular grace and power—lifting it high above the sound bite, the limerick and all but the best of epigrams. It has seventeen syllables: five in the first line, seven in the second, five in the third. Like this: |
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Writing a haiku |
Poems in three lines |
They do not rhyme, and they do not have titles: |
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Though peers of poems |
Though rhymes are not crimes |
But it must be more than cut up prose; a haiku should express a thought, fact or feeling of significance to the writer and reader: |
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Writing a haiku |
Much to aspire to— |
In many of the best, the last line represents a contrast, a resolution, even a surprise—somehow completing and enlighting the previous two: |
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The file you desire |
Great full-blooded gale |
The classical haiku include season words: words relating to nature and the passing of time. The best of them have a Zen like quality: |
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Walk summer night lanes |
Vast fields of sunlight |
More informal, colloquial subjects are however allowed—the Japanese call these senryu—and they extend the form: |
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Black, round, flat—with grooves |
Photocopiers |
Many haiku have what is called a pivot word that has more than one sense or meaning—the pivot word shades into the pun: |
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Writing a haiku |
Beneath the flight path |
An essential haiku quality is karumi, which means lightness of touch. The best haiku do not shout, preach or plod. Inward smiles, as well as the occasional outward guffaw, are legitimate reactions: |
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Suddenly awake |
Suddenly awake |
A leading early exponent was Basho; he sounds like a Beano character but was in fact a Japanese sage (1644–94). The leading contemporary exponent in English is undoubtedly Duo Terimati, also called The Great Master. All the examples given here are from his famous collection Bonsai Forest. Two of the Great Master’s innovations are the sandwich (or mirror) where the first and last lines are (almost) the same, and the use of extended character sets: |
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When I lie in bed |
Ye@s, 10nyson, £, |
Haiku about current affairs and including in-jokes about specific people or events can also be rewarding: |
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Other presidents |
Will Branson prevail |
In short, haiku can be as charming, and as brutal, as life itself is: |
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There’s been a meltdown |
Two hours since you died |
Why not have a go? They are not difficult (note: they have successfully been used in schools to encourage creative writing)—you might well surprise yourself. The good ones are very satisfying, the great ones—much, much harder—are equal to the best of poetry and philosophy. Can one get higher? |
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Why do galaxies |
A clear night of stars |
‘A good haiku is a pebble thrown into the pool of the listener’s mind, evoking associations out of the richness of his own memory. It invites the listener to participate instead of leaving him dumb with admiration while the poet shows off.’ The Way of Zen by Alan Watts (1962) |
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